Monthly Archive for March, 2006

Little Gems

A colleague recently introduced me to a little gem — a small out of print Strunk & White type book that has the advantages of being small and not being Strunk & White. (Not that there is anything wrong with S&W, of course). The Golden Book on Writing by David Lambuth is yet another writing handbook which appeals to the word geek in me. There is something concise and gentle about this book and I would recommend it to anyone fortunate enough to find a copy.

I do wonder about writing handbooks, however. Like I said, there is something in me that enjoys reading about writing and putting a sentence together. (There is also something in me that is never quite sure how to use a comma and am always up for a refresher course.) But do students like these books? Do they actually read them? The ones like Keys for Writers which are less “talky” and more like manuals seem like they might be kind of complicated for undergraduates. And S&W and Elbow seem to require students to actually take the time to read them. I wonder how helpful others have found these books. I also wonder if anyone else out there knows of any little gems I might enjoy.

Culture-specific forms of narration

This may sound naive to some people, but I only recently learned (from the chapter “Language and Literacy in the School years” by R. Ely, in “The Development of Language”) that there are two major forms of narrative: topic-focused narrative and topic-associating narrative. In fact, there may well be more forms, but I am not aware of them.

A topic-focuses narrative is a story about a single person or event that has a clear beginning, middle and end.

A topic-associating narrative is a story that links several episodes thematically, and these episodes may involve several principal characters and shifts in time and setting.

It is stated in this chapter that the former are mainly used by many middle-and working-class European-American children, while the latter are often used by working-class African Americans. While I did hear oral topic-associating narratives, I have never seen an essay written in this form. I was wondering if any of you did read such essays, and what would you tell the student in this case? Because on the one hand, we should not discourage creativity and personal style, but on the other, we want to help students learn to write in a way that would be appropriate for their future workplace. This seems to be almost like a vicious circle.

Communication, Pedagogy, and the Performing Arts

I am putting together a series of guest posts on this topic and want to get some immediate feedback about what might be useful for people to read about. I have done work with Writing faculty on using performance-related activities in the classroom to help urge reticent students to participate. For instance, I’ve encouraged professors to use images or clips that show people reading/performing texts to start discussion because it gets students away from strict textual analysis and prompts them to draw on their opinions in discussion. But, I’m hoping that my colleagues in theatre have more innovative ways of thinking about these three topics in conversation. Any initial thoughts? Anything people want to hear about specifically so that I can search out posts on that topic?

Preparing for college

In its March 10, 2006 issue The Chronicle of Higher Education published a survey of nearly 2000 high-school teachers and college faculty members on their perceptions of students’ preparedness for college.  A major finding is that there is a large gap between what teachers and faculty think about students’ academic skills. Eighty four percent of faculty as opposed to 65% of teachers said that high-school graduates are not adequately prepared for college education.   The gap is especially apparent in writing and math skills.  Only 6% of professors as opposed to 36% of teachers think that students are very well prepared in writing (similar figures are reported for perceptions of math skills).  The Chronicle devoted that issue to the role of colleges and universities in improving high-school education. The suggestion is that higher education institutions could cooperate with high-schools and take part in the education-reform efforts instead of spending billions of dollars on remedial work for unprepared students.  Several states have established programs to this end, such as the Early College Initiative in Georgia or the K-16 Partnership for Teaching and Learning in Maryland,  that bring together colleges and schools around the table.  I don’t know if similar programs exist in New York or not.  In any case, do you think there is a role for the Bernard L. Schwartz Institute, or similar institutions, in bringing City schools and colleges together to have a discussion about colleges’ expectations for first-year students and how these expectations could be met in high-schools? 

What Do We Mean by “Intensive”?

For years, we at the Schwartz Communication Institute at Baruch have insisted that a definition of a communication-intensive course (CIC) ought not quantify communication-intensive activities. That is, x number of writing assignments or oral presentations do not necessarily make a course communication-intensive. According to a set of guidelines for the development of CICs, an “intensive experience in communication” is one where students are engaged “in the full range of intellectual and practical processes that go into producing effective communication.” Similarly, an old definition states that a CIC

will emphasize writing, oral and/or computer-mediated presentations, with assignments and/or presentations judged by the logic of their argument as well as their proficiency and grace of expression. (emphasis mine)

What followed was a bulleted list of what a syllabus with a “proper emphasis on writing and speaking” might include yet here was no indication of how much writing or speaking students should do in a CIC.

For a while now, a number of different committees have struggled to come up with a new working definition of a CIC and have had a difficult time of it. The question of quantifying writing and speaking assignments has come up again and again and is worth revisting if for no other reason.

Here’s the question, then, for those of you who teach or work with communication-intensive courses: should we define a particular number of draft pages, writing assignments (low- or high- stakes), presentations, minutes spent in front of an audience, etc. in nailing down what exactly makes a course communication-intensive? Is it worthwhile to start designating CICs according to how much rather simply what kind of writing, speaking, etc. they have students do? The jury is out so let’s bring it in.

“Thin Slicing” Student Writers

In his book Blink: The Power of Thinking without Thinking, Malcolm Gladwell has an interesting chapter entitled “The Theory of Thin Slices: How a Little Bit of Knowledge Goes a Long Way.” “Thin slicing,” writes Gladwell, “refers to the ability of our unconscious to find patterns in situations and behavior based on very narrow slices of experience.” The concept is demonstrated in the work of psychologist John Gottman, who for decades has been analyzing videotaped conversations of married couples, in an effort to understand the “language” of the subtle cue.

Gottman has become quite adept: after viewing only a short segment of a conversation, he is able to predict with 95 percent accuracy whether the couple will still be together in 15 years. Often Gottman’s analyses defy common expectations. An apparently healthy relationship may turn out to be essentially unhealthy, and vice versa. Gladwell writes that when he (Gladwell) tried his hand at analyzing conversations he was able to predict correctly only 50 percent of the time, that he “would have done just as well by flipping a coin.” The difficulty is that the cues–guarded words, fleeting expressions, frowns, changes of tone, and so forth–are numerous, subtle, and often ambiguous. What makes Gottman so accurate, Gladwell discovers, is that he simplifies his task, focusing not on every last detail, but on the more obvious, and more obviously important, cues, which he calls the “Four Horsemen”: defensiveness, stonewalling, criticism, and contempt.

Perhaps I’m just obsessed with communications pedagogy, but I’m wondering if any of this could be applied to the teaching of writing. Gladwell doesn’t mention (at least in this chapter) whether Gottman applies thin slicing prescriptively, and of course Gottman’s subjects wouldn’t be able to change behavioral patterns as easily as Gottman can recognize them. Yet it would certainly be helpful (I would think) for a marriage partner to know when s/he is being contemptuous, and to know that such behavior can undermine a relationship.

Similarly, it would be extremely helpful for student writers to know what they consistently do that undermines their writing. Might there possibly be writers’ “Horsemen,” tendencies that could be verbalized in more concrete terms than “unfocused argument,” “gaps in logic,” “organizational problems,” and the like? Might it be possible for an instructor to “thin slice” student writing, to quickly read through a short passage and be able to recommend, in a phrase or two, something that would have far greater consequence for the student than a close reading of, and copious commenting on, an extended essay? This would greatly reduce the labor-intensiveness of teaching writing, as well as more efficiently addressing the needs of the student. But perhaps this is an overly “pipey” dream.

Digital Audio Comments in the Age of iPod

If margins of student papers aren’t enough real estate for your comments, or if you don’t have time to meet all students individually, then Jeff Sommers has a low-threshold application for you. He suggests creating digital recordings that you can insert in Word drafts, directly email to students, or deposit in Blackboard’s Digital Drop Box. Your operating system should already have voice recording software; if not, you can use free, cross-platform downloads like Audacity. Here are some sample commentaries. They are like student-teacher conferences you can take home and listen to in a more comfortable setting with your paper in front of you. Sommers’ recordings are on average only about 5 minutes long, but he covers a lot of ground. Compared with the usual scrawlings on margins, the audio comments are clearer, more precise, more personal, and tackle at length how strongly/weakly ideas are developed. This can encourage students to be more thoughtful about revision instead of basing it solely on where the red ink is. (Here are some interviews with students.) Does anyone think that such an application would be useful in his/her work? What would be the hurdles for you (self-consciousness, time, learning the technology, etc.)?

Student Self-evaluation

Does anyone have experience with having students evaluate their own drafts of papers? I think it’s important to get students to start thinking of their own work in critical and evaluative terms, to see that is not just an authority saying, “you should do this; it would be better if you could make it like this.” etc.

Last semester I developed a form with the following fields:

This essay is about ____

It’s main argument is ___

It is based on the following readings ___

The main strengths of this essay are ____

Is the argument well developed? How so or how not? ___

Explain how this essay is logical. Explain how this essay could be more clear ___

How can this essay be improved? ____

The intention was to have students start thinking in this way BEFORE coming to see a writing consultant. However, none of the students who were given this form last semester came to see me. Does anyone have feedback on the usefulness or limitations of my handout?

Considering Pedablogy 6.0

The first student post is up on the course blog in Writing for the Social Sciences at CWE. It has taken a bit of negotiating, pushing, help logging in, and we’ve survived two potential difficulties.

The first was due to my own inexperience with blogs. We spent half of one class session together in the computer lab, because CWE’s wireless signal does not quite make it to my classroom in the far corner. Fortunately the CWE tech person there is very accommodating (and a Baruch graduate!) and let us take over the room. In our jammed in session there, I showed students how to navigate the ‘administer’ side of the blog. As we went through that process, I found that a student in the class had used the same login that I had, and in trying to change hers, I deleted mine. Thus I was locked out of the blog for a day or so. Fortuitously, all students had administrative access, so someone then invited me to join as a member. Good grief!

The second issue required more dialogue between myself and the class, and a short period of informal writing to boot. After looking at the sign-up sheet, I discovered that of the ‘blogger’ openings, all but one were taken by male students. Further, all the ‘commenter’ spots were filled by females students. This was especially bothersome because the ratio of male-female students in the class is the exact inverse of those blogging spaces. Our first reading for the semester had been Adrienne Rich’s “Awakening the Dead: Writing as ReVision, in which she talks about her own struggle to awaken as a writer, amidst the patriarchal culture of male writers and writing. When I brought my concerns with the schedule to the students’ attention, most were hesitant to connect the problem to gender. Some said they just felt more comfortable commenting rather than blogging. Others pointed to scheduling issues, or that someone had already taken the topic they wanted. Really, only two students (one female and one male) were willing to say that they thought gender played a role in how the schedule had ‘ended up.’ First we discussed, then they wrote, then I asked them what they thought Adrienne Rich would have to say, and then I sent around a new schedule that was more clearly organized with more informative topical explanations. The result was a schedule with which I was much happier. And, I’m happy to report…

The first blog by a student was posted this week! It’s exciting to see her reflection on Renato Rosaldo’s “Grief and a Headhunter’s Rage” and his use of the term ritual, to see a student voice on a public site. I’m thrilled to have students entering the blogosphere.