Check the technique, see if you can follow it

Katy Perry’s auto-tune free performance on Saturday Night Live was surprising and compelling to me, after a summer of the ubiquitous post-production high gloss sound of “California Gurls.” Seeing her on SNL, working to hit the notes, her voice going thin and strained at times, other times really off tune, was fun because she seemed to be taking a risk. The riskiness seemed kind of theatrical to me, but also like a sports event—it was a physical chance she took, and if she fell we’d actually watch her physically wipe out or stumble.

Katy Perry, SNL

See how relieved she looks when she gets to stay in the middle-register, with the back-up vocalist and louder music behind her? What a relief, she’s home free. That’s entertainment! And also kind of sport.

As studio production gets more sophisticated, are singers having to work harder to recreate the recorded version live? In 1992, LL Cool J was maybe trying to put some heft to his lightweight, commercial image by performing a song from the slickly produced album “Walking with a Panther.” On MTV, he sang a stripped-down version of “Mama said knock you out,” with a band. It looked like a physically demanding performance—you could hear him working to finish phrases before he ran out of breath.

He was competing with heftier musicians like Dr. Dre, and much wittier, defter musicians like A Tribe Called Quest and Gang Starr, whose chorus—“Check the technique, see if you can follow it”—tagged its own sophistication as a dare. So it seems telling that we still come back to the performer’s body for authenticity—I’m surprised that SNL even stages un-auto-tuned songs. If physical training and technique is a hidden scaffolding behind pop music, then things like auto-tune might draw more value to the physical in terms of authenticity. It was fun to see then, like now with Katy Perry, that performers still use their voices and physicality to prove something.

Same show, different audience

After teaching a summer intensive course in public speaking this year, I thought I’d finally figured out how to be a good teacher. My class was engaged, thoughtful, collaborative and often lively. I knew, though, that part of the charm came from the summer itself—my students weren’t taking five other classes, and we met for longer periods of time, three times a week. It was just more focused and sustained. Towards the end of the semester, I spoke with a few other teachers who agreed when I asked them, “Aren’t summer classes great?” They agreed more heartily than, honestly, I wanted them to, indicating that  my own great class wasn’t just caused by my  better work, but by the qualities of summer intensive, and maybe also the kind of orientation towards school that students who take summer classes are likely to have.

Twice in the past week, a teacher has told me that they are teaching two classes of one section, and that the two classes respond completely differently to the same material. Shown the same video, one class is inspired and engaged, leading to animated class discussion. The other class is bored. This situation is a good litmus test for a teacher—you know the lack of response from your students isn’t a direct reflection on your work. But, what are you to do? Is it our job as teachers to inspire and engage? Of course, it is a two-way street, students have to come ready to extend their imaginations, not simply be catered to.

My questions is–how to account for this disparity in student response? Should we change our tactics from one class to another? Is it, as other teachers I’ve spoken with have guessed, group dynamics? And how do you change the dynamics of a group, when you’re only one in 24?

Deliberative democracy and communication studies

The Journal of Public Deliberation (which posts of all its articles online for free) recently posted a special issue on higher education. An article on communication as a discipline in U.S. colleges, “Communication studies and Deliberative Democracy: Current Contributions and Future Possibilities,” by Martín Carcasson, Laura W. Black, and Elizabeth S. Sink, makes an argument common to many other authors in this issue, and one that is probably an inherent belief with scholars of the concept of deliberative democracy:

“It is clear that one of the major barriers to a more deliberative democracy is the lack of quality interaction, and thus understanding and mutual respect across perspectives” (2010: 13).

These authors focus their analysis on communication studies, as well as on other classes such as rhetoric, group communication, and interpersonal communication.

“Perhaps most emblematic of the connection between communication education and democracy are the public speaking courses required for thousands of students each semester. This course has an inherent to skills relevant to democracy, as students are typically asked to research public issues and persuade their fellow student-citizens of particular points of view” (7).

However, the authors remark, “unfortunately” these classes often focus more on “individual achievement, needs of marketplace, and professional presentation skills.”

They see these skills as suitable to an “adversarial” kind of democracy, rather than a deliberative one. I think adversarial democracy more aptly describes what we’ve got, actually. But the question of which values, what system of beliefs, undergirds the way we teach communication is one I was really happy to see grappled with, out in the (relative) open of a free, scholarly journal.

If there are communicative values behind what we teach when we teach Com 1010, they don’t seem to be foregrounded, made available for critique. When I was assigned two sections of this class as a new grad student, I partly compensated for my lack of teaching experience by approaching the class as if it was a thesis project. I grabbed on to a few oblique references to democracy and public speaking in The Art of Public Speaking textbook—democratic values like respect and inclusion. This ended up taking over my own research interest, and really influencing the way I taught the class.

I saw these norms in the way not only public speaking but also composition is taught: including and respecting the other side, representing others’ arguments with compassion as well as accuracy, crediting others’ work. But I wonder if this method of communicating will be fairly unique to college. As my students leave college and advance through adulthood, I imagine them sifting themselves into communities of cultural and political taste, and looking over to the other side from across a wider divide, often apoplectic. That’s been my experience. Political conversations in my observation mostly seem about heightening our own beliefs, more thoroughly dismissing the opposition. Where outside of class do we practice this method of empathy, reciprocity, and inquiry with those whose beliefs most distinctly contrast with our own?

“Deliberative scholars and practitioners” according to the article, “strive to create spaces where multiple voices can not only be heard, but truly listened to, even in communities that have marked power imbalances.”

“Yet despite the numerous links between the fields and exemplary democratic practice, teaching and scholarship too often remains indirect, dispersed, secondary, rather than at the forefront of disciplinary concerns” (1).

The article is a call for what Charles Taylor described as “liberalism as a fighting creed,” rather than a procedural fallback, and rather than a negative freedom to be left alone, to do your own thing. I really like this article, it’s comprehensive and clear, with a nice overview of communication studies in its various versions in higher ed. But I think rather than put this belief system at the forefront of concerns, it should also be discussed, made available for critique, rather than tucked into a textbook like The Art of Public Speaking, an assumed, unexamined, scattered belief system.

Storytelling and business ethics

Bernard L. Schwartz spoke at the Schwartz Communications Institute symposium on April 30th. “I’m a capitalist,” he said, and a “big D democrat.” Schwartz narrated the financial crisis from the perspective of his own political and moral values, that a company has a responsibility to its employers, shareholders, and the public at large. He spoke about capitalism as a system in which work supports safety and human flourishing. This, I thought like a person seeing something she’d only read about in books for the first time, is a capitalist social democrat. But I heard the story Schwartz told first, not the ideology, the way he told the story was my introduction to a particular perspective, formed by experience and knowledge that I myself do not have.

This semester, a professor whose class I’m supporting asked his students to give their opinion on whether or not technological development should be regulated, if it should be up to corporations and market demand, or if government should intervene. The students’ opinions, values, and beliefs varied widely. I found everyone’s perspective intriguing and compelling. As with Schwartz, hearing individuals speak about their economic values and opinions humanized what have predominantly been abstract or historical economic concepts to me. Cass Sunstein’s point that the proliferation of media is making it less likely for people with different political affiliations to talk to each other seemed right, as I realized how exceptional this situation was for me.

While each of the students seemed insightful, willing to probe and test their ideas against other opinions and contradicting evidence, entirely capable of reflective judgment about economics and ethics, it was very clear to me that this was the first time they’d been asked this question in their time at Baruch. I looked at the listing of courses, and found a course called “Ethics, Economics and the Business System,” in the Philosophy Department, a 3000 level class. I wanted to make it a general requirement.

On a recent Charlie Rose show about Goldman Sachs, Newsweek writer and Princeton journalism and writing professor Evan Thomas was asked if the recent scandal is going to keep “the best and brightest” students from the firm.

April 27, Charlie Rose.

Charlie Rose: Is Goldman Sachs a place that the brightest that the smartest people coming out of universities want to go to work, if they want to go to Wall Street, that’s where they want to go?

Evan Thomas: I teach at Princeton, believe me Princeton kids want to go to Goldman. Oh yes, overwhelmingly, even more now. The message that’s Goldman is bad news has not filtered down to the class at Princeton, lemme tell ya. At Princeton pretty much everybody wants to go to Goldman Sachs.

Charlie Rose: What does that say about the values of kids in college today? That’s a question for a whole other show.

Evan Thomas: But I’m telling you, the mystique of Wall Street has not died, even as Congress tries to destroy it. Kids still. You know why? Cause they think it’s a sure bet. They still think if you go to Goldman, Goldman is going to navigate these waters. I’m still going to have a house in Greenwich and a boat.

Charlie Rose: And a G5.

Evan Thomas and Charlie Rose laugh.

Gillian Tett: But they also join it thinking, I can do it for a couple of years, I’ll keep my soul, and then I can get out with the money. Now one of the reasons why these emails (from one of Golman’s traders) are so fascinating is they illustrate very graphically the kind of conflicts joining Goldman Sachs would actually face. He hasn’t been there that long, he can see the contradictions and the hypocrisy of what he’s doing, and yet he’s still playing the game.

I wonder how much opportunity Baruch students have to explore their own ethical perspective. I’m teaching a public speaking class this summer, and hoping to make it a personal essay assignment. I wonder how often it comes up for Baruch students, as they make their way to graduation, and if professors here would echo Evan Thomas’s “overwhelmingly, even more” characterization of Princeton. I was glad that, from my limited experience, I wouldn’t.

Everybody’s Canvas

My favorite defacement of an ad in a subway station began as an image of the New York skyline in a hazy sunset. I don’t remember what the ad was for, but I don’t think the designers had figured that it was too soon after 9/11 to depict a reddish, smokey skyline without evoking dread and sadness in the commuters who rushed by, barely taking in the image and definitely not noticing the brand. It was great to see how the contributions to this poster added up over a week or so. First, yes, there was a magic marker drawing of an airplane headed towards the top of a building. Then, few days later a cartoon in ballpoint pen of a little alien appeared, hovering in a spaceship over the East River. A smiling Martian, with cute curling antennae. Bit by bit, other drawings started to fill up the sky, drawn with different pens, in different styles. There was a flying alligators, and even a yelling George Bush stick figure. I would pass this poster in its many phases, and feel really happy about my fellow New Yorkers for collectively and creatively remaking what had maybe been a disturbing and insensitive ad agency’s miscalculation. I thought of this graffiti as a great way to respond to the impolite media that was too quick to jump on the event and fictionalize it.

I can tend to read too much into things, but this year I began to feel like the way some subway posters were defaced was asking for attention beyond the usual idle tearing or tagging. An ad for the movie “Leap Year,” suddenly seemed to actually look like the strangling weed the romantic comedy about a desperate single woman actually is. Someone had either tested under the top layer of the poster to see what was underneath, or had remembered the previous ad for a horror movie (“Wolfman”) in the same place. Someone sliced pieces of the first layer of the bright green “Leap Year” to show twisted dark vines beneath it. The heroine of the romantic comedy now looked threatened by the clutches of a monster, and it was the encircling grasp of another movie. Was it a feminist cut-up, or a coincidence? And was I over-interpreting? I took a picture, and showed it to a friend. He said, “Hm. Maybe. It’s hard to tell.”

Later, a sad face appeared inside the poster for the “Tori and Dean: Home Sweet Hollywood” show.

And, soon after that, a knife and the same tangled vines from “Wolfman” appeared between Jennifer Lopez and some actor guy in the ad for “Back Up Plan.”

My favorite one (sadly, I didn’t get a photo) was of two morning talk show hosts. After their hyper-groomed and hugely smiling faces had been up for a week or so, the subway razor artist peeled around their heads to reveal much bigger heads beneath them. Now it looked as if huge monster heads were surging out of the perfectly suited morning show host bodies.

Eventually, I put my question to Google and turned up a video and an article in the Greenpoint Gazette about an artist who goes by Poster Boy.

At the Schwartz Institute Symposium last week, keynote speaker Clay Shirky described how the internet allows people to critique and adapt systems and institutions. What had previously been one-way communication (television, print ads, etc) has become two-way and multiple-way (Amazon, Facebook). Sharkey succinctly and compelling theorized what he calls a revolution in communication behavior that comes from adapting to these new technologies. I’ve been thinking of how Shirky’s explanations of the effects and significance of new technologies could also be useful towards theorizing older technologies and behaviors. I’ve thought of public art that did a kind of political, public critique of being a 90’s phenomenon, but at that time it was associated with singular artists. I like not being able to tell when subway ad defacement is intentional, when it is the work of someone who considers himself an artist, and when it is more random. It makes me look at these images differently.

For other examples of subway art (and better photography) see this article in New York S8#%ty.

Assessment as Collaboration

Jo in Perfect Form
Creative Commons License photo credit: Mark Setchell

Michael Jolley’s post on ‘Testing As a Weapon” led me to a conversation with a high school teacher friend of mine who lives on the West Coast. Sooz began teaching English in a Chicago public high school right after she completed the Golden Apple Teacher Education program (similar to Teach for America). We hardly spoke her first year of teaching, which seemed to consist of working at the school, working at home, crying, and sleeping.  Students fought in the halls and in her classroom, and her principal was ridiculous. Proving the truth inside the teacher movie cliché, the heroine persevered, both students and teacher were changed, new perspectives were shared, and the future became more hopeful. When I began teaching as an adjunct at Baruch, she was well beyond the boot camp years of teaching, and the trial and error, conferences, reading, rigor and resourcefulness she’d put in often made her seem a decade ahead of me in wisdom and skill.

I began the ratio that continued for four years of my time as a doctoral student: much class and mentored time focused on specialized academic study, marginal time talking with friends and fellow adjuncts as I flailed around my first year as a teacher. Sooz was my main resource for teaching advice before becoming a fellow at Schwartz (where talking about our work is structured into frequent meetings).  And we’ve shared more of the same problems than I thought we would, since she was teaching high school and I was teaching college, especially in grammar and writing.

Recently, she told me opinion of “The Race to the Top” and standardized testing. I thought of the difference between her experience in one of the lowest rated Chicago public schools, compared to a high school in a pretty affluent area on the west coast. For the students in a bio-tech program, the innovations and approaches she’d developed in Chicago were ineffective and inappropriate. She adjusted, developed, got to know them, and they got to know her.

But she’s been laid off, due to rather drastic cuts. A teacher who regularly teaches AP classes will replace three other teachers in the English department. That means that one person will teach a greater ratio of AP to regular classes than the laid-off teachers did. How might that affect that department as a whole? How can we judge teachers when we don’t follow these shifting contexts? And, if Sooz goes to a completely different school, with a different culture of students, will that be taken into account?

An Atlantic Monthly article described Teach for America’s research on what makes a good teacher: it argues that the common traits of good teachers is that they consistently redesign their pedagogy. How do you test for this, when it seems like precisely the lack of a rigid system is the key to success?

Sooz is thinking of developing another assessment system, one that she designed and planned to implement next year as part of a continuation of her role as Professional Development Coordinator at her school. Fellow teachers would visit classrooms several times over the course of a year. It is a much more holistic approach than grades and testing, and it combines assessment with collaboration, skill and experience-sharing, which is something many teachers do in an ad hoc way already, too many without much institutional support.

Teaching teaching

The phrase “classroom management” appears a few times in this Sunday’s New York Times article on teaching, and the author seems to apologize for it. It is kind of icky, but why?

final exam
Creative Commons License photo credit: dcJohn

I think part of the problem is that it implies one-size-fits-all, when individual students are…individuals, and group dynamics vary from class to class. There are video clips in the article of teachers in class, with a narrator who explains their techniques. I watched all the ones on the Times website, and went to the Uncommon Schools site to watch more. They’re compelling and entertaining. And then, the wince factor arises with a description of how a teacher “draws kids’ attention to the normalcy of compliancy, everyone is doing it.” Lots of the ideas on the Uncommon Schools site seem useful and insightful, but I also know that if I tried to mimic what I’ve watched people do in videos, it would be ridiculous. There’s a smile between a teacher and a student in one clip that isn’t instructional so much as inspirational. It shows the kind of particular attention to a person’s distinct way of thinking and expressing themselves, that seems beyond these techniques and studies.

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“I think that’s why after citing a lot of research on teaching, this article and a recent Atlantic article both claim that it is very hard to predict what traits make good teacher. The teacher is one part of a huge variable, and one person’s cheesy gesture is another’s brilliant interaction.

What is the literature of money? (that isn’t Ayn Rand or Jerry McGuire?)

Once, a student told me that he couldn’t present his final assignment for my public speaking class because he had to take the CPA exam. It was understood that the exam would take precedence as a kind of gateway to gainful employment, but I was still a little surprised at how compelled I felt to step aside. As an adjunct, I’ve been made aware of the connection between public speaking and employment for Baruch students. Several teachers work in public relations firms or as corporate consultants outside the college, and students seem to respect and learn from they way they both model and teach the conventions of business professional comportment and conventions.

I’ve told my students that public speaking assignments should prepare them for the corporate world in terms of how to coherently present their work, and how to be poised, authoritative, and collegial doing it. I’d like to have more to say than this, but less to say than the broad justification of humanities that I’ve heard before (and largely believe). While I haven’t had any interest in the business world before, after teaching at Baruch for a few years, I’ve become more and more aware of how much I don’t know about it. I feel kind of hampered in my ability to figure out how what I am trying to offer (my own work research is in democracy and culture) might connect to their lives outside college. And hampered from connecting what I’m doing to what I guess makes up the majority of their classtime. I looked up ‘what can the humanities do for business’ and found a Stanford webpage from early this year, in which several people respond to Stanley Fish’s (he’s like academia’s Joe Liberman!). John Bender says, “Not too long ago, the New York Times reported interviews with a number of CEOs who connected their ability as managers to their long-term engagement with books of all kinds, including fiction and poetry.” Bryan Wolf responds that Fish is “trying to save the humanities from instrumentalization.” But I’m actually curious about what, in terms of business, that instrumentalization might be.

The Robert Zicklin Center for Corporate Integrity has hosted some interesting panels, one on corporate failures that may have led to the current crisis called, “Did we get what we deserve?” And another one I wish I’d seen that featured alumni Edward Zinbarg, who wrote a book called Faith, Morals, and Money. So, I vow in 2010 to go to this center’s events, and meanwhile I’m working on a list of my favorite novels and plays, and the different ways they address money. So far, I’ve got: Aristophanes, The Acharnians, which stars a merchant who argues against an idealistic warmonger; anything by Charles Dickens; Easter, a play about debt and Christianity by Strindberg; Jerry McGuire (money and success is love); and Slumdog Millionaire. The more I read, the more leftward I seem to drift. And, while I refuse to read anymore Ayn Rand, I’m interested in literature that views neoliberalism and capitalism critically as well as positively. So far, Jerry McGuire is all I can think of. I’d like to find some writing on connection between literature and economics. So far, all I can think of is the passage in Capital when Marx talks about the lace-maker’s death notice, and how much it reminded me of Dickens. I’d like to read some fiction over winter break, even though I should be working and working. And I would like a booklist of fiction on money.

This is not thinking

Last summer a student in my public speaking class said that “Cloverfield” was ‘pretty good for an action movie.’ And then he said, ‘I mean it’s a disaster movie, which is a kind of action movie.’  I asked him to tell me what an action movie is as a form or genre, what its properties are. This led to a conversation in which we put the film into context, so rather than just sketch the plot, describe a spectacular scene or two, and name the actors, we talked about the form of a disaster film, its history, and the range of locations and themes it has traversed so far.

When I was an undergrad, my professor Heidi Krueger sent us to look at pointillism paintings at the Moma, then read Gertrude Stein’s attempts to translate pointillism into writing. Stein dispersed units of description throughout a paragraph the way Seurat’s paintings disperse dots of color throughout the frame. After years of reading transparently, without reflecting on the mechanism of the forms of writing, this exercise was a kind of “Matrix” moment for me. I began to see the way forms and genres impose structure, and I began to see representation as a kind of translation of experience or thought which is never complete or direct. In any translation there is adaptation, even distortion, and maybe even loss. I guess translation can be alienating, as well. And I wonder if this is what might be partly what is happening when I hear students mimic the style of the texts they’re assigned in class, or the style of their professor’s lecture.

At the Writing Across the Curriculum Conference last week, two fellows described teaching with different forms. In her class on personality psychology Valerie Futch highlights the way research questions and methodology determine results by assigning personality questionnaires to her students. Doug Singsen taught a class on comics in which he assigned his students to diagram a page, indicating different logics connecting one frame to another: character-to-character, aspect-to-aspect, etc. I was struck by the way both of them seemed to foreground the form, of comic or psychological study, and the way this foregrounding moved their students past a book-report kind of absorption and summarization, to an awareness of the way form works as a kind of structuring logic.

I’ve heard the phrase “writing is thinking” in my experiences with Writing Across the Curriculum, and after the last WAC colloquium I thought about other kinds of work that friends of mine have described: photography, contracting, pattern-making. If these are all forms of thinking, maybe we could say that writing is the academically consecrated form of thinking. Or, that writing is a representation of thinking, one that requires translation into a specific form.

I’ve noticed a tendency among students to parrot or mimic the style of the texts they use in class, and I wonder if this is because for them, unlike grad students and professors, writing is not thinking. Instead, expressing thinking through writing might for some students be an act of extreme translation, from the thinking they already do (in forms other than writing) into the form of writing. After all, academics write and read all the time, we think in it like fish in water. Writing and text is perhaps transparent to us, but more or less opaque others.

The conversation with my student about “Cloverfield” made me want to integrate other forms that we all encounter all the time into academic work, as a way to make the structure opaque to both student and teacher, and allow different levels of competence and levels of analysis into the classroom. I’d like to assign students to write “Cloverfield”  in the form of the first few pages of Pride and Prejudice; or draw the argument of an academic essay as a comic strip; or make a news report of a poem, explaining logical, structural mechanisms across different forms.

In my first year as a WAC fellow, I’ve learned about integrating journals and blogs into academic assignments, and this seems like a great way to connect writing to the thinking that students are already doing outside of college. (If we agree that people generally write emails, and read blogs).

Photo by Shannon Ebner.

Photo by Shannon Ebner.

I could think of them all these forms as representations of thinking. That’s the way that Derrida and post-structuralism has real world resonance for me. I wonder if by making several forms opaque, we might give students a sense of analytical and expressive competence, which could provide a kind of transition to academic writing. And I wonder if an alienation from popular forms like movies, songs, and news reports might work well with an alienation from academic forms like essays. So we could spread the alienation around, and categorize writing as another form of thinking among many. After all, we arrive at college already schooled in, even experts in, movies, songs, and news reports. And with Blogs@Baruch available here it is possible to integrate many forms into an assignment, or ongoing assignments in a class. (The Baruch blog projects I’ve peeked in on, from classes on food, Chaucer, journalism, etc. are compelling to me, and I imagine they would be to students too.) What if there was a class that didn’t focus on a specific content, but instead was about forms. Is there? I gathered from the WAC colloquium that teachers are assigning writing exercises that highlight the methods and styles of different disciplines, but I’m looking for ways that other teachers might be doing this kind of work. It is my current dream class, working title: “Forms, Forms, Forms!” or maybe, “Post-structuralism and You.”

VOCAT Switcheroo: Assessing the Assessor

A few weeks ago, I logged on to VOCAT for the first time, and as watched the video of a student’s rehearsal for their presentation, I was surprised to hear my own voice. I was sitting near the camera, and focused on the students as they went through their Powerpoint slides. Maybe because the camera was pointed towards them, at the time of the recording I was unaware that I was also recording myself.

And this made for a kind of unexpected self-assessment, along with the student assessment I was prepared to do. I’ve often wondered if my voice is too low, if I repeat myself too much, if what I’m saying makes any sense, if what I’m saying is more helpful than confusing to my students. And I realized, listening to myself talk to a student on the VOCAT video, that I’ve spent six years of graduate school trying to get better at absorbing what I read, and better at writing clearly. But I haven’t put any sustained or rigorous effort into getting better at speaking.

For me, the VOCAT incident, the unexpected switch of the assessment tool back on the assessor, made me realize how alone I have felt with this part of teaching. The first day of your adjunct job: the door shuts behind you, it is just you and students. A professor visits my class for one session during the semester, sometimes they don’t stay for the whole class. Their written assessment is usually generous and they’ve all talked with me after the class to offer encouragement and the wisdom of their experience. But, you know, the rest of the time, it is just you in there. Talking and talking. Wondering if the students are falling asleep because they’ve just eaten lunch, or is it the lulling drone of my voice? I know there are books and articles out there I could be reading on how to effectively engage a class. And I’ve sat in on other professor’s classes to see what I pick up from the way they engage a class. George Shulman at NYU Gallatin showed me how effective it is to value every student’s contribution, repeating it, rephrasing it, writing it on the board. Heidi Kruger at the New School held me spellbound with her intense, low whisper. Sekou Sundiata at the New School moved around the class like we were the orchestra and he was conducting us.

But, what works for me, and for my students, on this particular subject? I hadn’t really focused on that so much. Which is weird, given how, you know, important oral communication skills are in teaching.  Should the VOCAT assessment tool be turned on teachers? Well, I wouldn’t volunteer. But, when confronted with it, I thought it showed me some things that I should be aware of.

This brings me to the connection between writing and speaking. At the recent WAC conference, several people brought up the fact that writing often, in different forms, helps people become better writers. Speaking about writing also improves writing.  We talk about students ‘finding their own voice.’ One impediment to that might be that students are reading authors whose voices are quite different than their own. Often when I’m working with students on their presentation, I’ll ask them to summarize or draw a conclusion from their research. They articulate clear, original, logically organized claims aloud. But, when it comes to the formal work, they leave this out. Why? The answer I’ve heard more than once was, “But, that is just my opinion.”

What I want students to do, what I’ve heard other teachers say they want students to do, is enter a conversation with the authors they cite. What I’ve seen happen too often is a student articulating their own view, then summarizing an author’s view, using the author’s own style. How can we yoke them together?

One possible way might be to value thought when it is articulated aloud, not just in print. And one way to do this might be to film it, to actually turn the light and focus on recording speaking a thought, the way writing records a thought.

At the WAC meeting, Thomas Meechum and Karen Gregory’s documentary about the writing process in professor Michele Pacht’s class showed students responding to questions about their opinions about graffiti. I wondered if the heightened attention of the camera on the spoken thoughts helped the students to value their thoughts enough to commit them to print. I wonder if I should review the recording of my voice, talking to my students, as many times as I am reviewing the drafts of my dissertation proposal. I kind of think I should.